thank u! here is what i came up with. i hope you like
I sit here all alone.
feels like I might explode.
But i don’t wanna go-
I sing to myself to no-end
because music is my only true friend

Bbeleibs on 2/22/2012 6:10:31 PM

Ok so I've done alot of song stuff but two days ago i got this part of a song stuck in my head;

When we grow up we change alot
put on some extra make-up
curl our hair everyday
strike a cute pose when they walk our way

ya we flirt like crazy with the hot guys
and fight with our best friends all the time

thats it. i know it isnt long, but i got interrupted when i was writing it and when i went back to work on it some more my brain was just like dead here is my one of my other problem songs;

i didnt even know you before,
but then we opened up a knew door,
wish that we could dance across the floor,
but it cant be...

cause i would climb the highest tree
i would dance across the sea,
ya id do anything for thee,
if it was meant to be-

i absolutely loved this part of the song but the rest, isnt even worth writing. it was really really lame i showed this song to 1 of my friends and she said it was really good, so if you have some ideas i would really appreciate them. btw i have like a ton of songs like this, when i write the song but only a part of it is good so if you have any tips that would be great or if you have a frind/s who is also good at writing songs it would be cool to talk to her as well just for some extra input. I really appreciate any help you can give me, also if my songs are horrible, just tell me. cause I mean, i want an honest opinion. thanks again- Bernadette P.

Bbeleibs on 2/8/2012 11:25:07 PM

thanks

BTW1102 on 12/24/2011 7:37:10 PM