i found breaking dawn really...uh...different. the charaters weren't acting like themselves, and the whole thing was just changing the rules of the twilight universe. ;) if stephenie knew this was coming all along, couldn't she have written New Moon and Eclipse (which she wrote just b/c her publishers and editors asked her to continue the story so bella wouldn't be married while she was still IN high school) to work with Breaking Dawn?? the only sane one was jacob, but even then, once he imprinted on renesmee, he joined the loony club. and renesmee, who shouldn't have been born, seemed so unreal. everybody just loves her and she's so beautiful- speaking of which, that's all they care about now. alice says as bella is being changed, something like "she's gonna be beutiful" and then edward says something about bella that's like "that was graceful, even for a vampire" i'm like "what? BELLA graceful??" and bella became unrelatable after she was changed. it was like jacob's worst fear- she wasn't bella anymore. how is a target audience of teenage girls supposed to realte to a perfect, pretty, graceful, married, mother???
she could have taken the story from New Moon and Eclipse and expanded on that, but instead she hung on to her original, and that was the real mistake here.

by lifelynx22 on 8/24/2008 8:14:16 AM

that's not the cover of breaking dawn!!!!!! it has a red pawn and white queen on the chessboard. obviously you just searched "breaking dawn cover" and posted some fan's imagining of it. did you read the book, too, or base your article off of other reviews???

by sweetdreams33 on 8/24/2008 7:58:38 AM