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Running Emotions - An original short story

Hey girls! Here’s an original short story written by a GL reader just like you. Leave your critiques in the comments please. Running Emotions I stand...
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I think this short story should be a novella or even a novel someday. Like miki_amu_1fan and skatetime said, this seems like a piece straight from a book. I love to read and write, so when I finished reading this, I wanted more. I truly believe that this could one day be a bestseller. Keep writing and doing whatever it is that you're doing Smile
alaways and forever,
Jayden <3

by bbluel0ver on 2/24/2011 6:37:29 PM

 
 

OMG! This. Is. Awesome. Whoever did this, is REALLY good. And I agree with miki_amu_1fan. I feel like this a summary of a longer story. To whoever wrote this, if you see this, I just wanted to tell you that you should make a book with this. I would SO read it.

by izzyrox7198 on 2/24/2011 6:36:33 PM

 
 

I agree with miki_amu_1fan. It's really good, but I think you should go into detail about the first relationship. You should definetly keep writing.

by skatetime on 2/24/2011 6:00:22 PM

 
 

There are many reasons that people chose this time period to make changes to American life. I'm sure that many people had tried to claim their rights before, but due to lack of technology, it was to hard to spread the word and gather supporters. Now that new communication technology had been invented, people were able to spread the message of their cause and rally supporters. Another reason that many people chose this time was because they followed the examples of others. They saw that people were making the changes they wanted to see occur, and it gave them hope for their cause. Others probably got tired of having to deal with not having their rights that were guaranteed by the Constitution. Those are the most likely reasons that people chose this time period to make changes to American life.

by pondhouse on 2/24/2011 5:55:20 PM

 
 

'sokay... good detail, but I feel like the real story is missing, you know? like this is just an expert of a longer story.

by miki_amu_1fan on 2/24/2011 5:48:26 PM

 
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