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Running Emotions - An original short story

Hey girls! Here’s an original short story written by a GL reader just like you. Leave your critiques in the comments please. Running Emotions I stand...
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nice.... this is really good

by artsgurl983 on 5/7/2011 11:13:33 PM

 
 

that is wonderful!!!! i absolutely LOVE it! keep on writing!

by bookworm22 on 3/10/2011 9:29:43 PM

 
 

one word AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHmazing!
really a truly great piece
keep writing Laughing

by Lexi5000 on 2/28/2011 5:06:03 PM

 
 

Amazing!! You're a great writer. and if this really happened..well congratz! (= thats so sweet!

by cheyluhvya on 2/27/2011 11:34:11 PM

 
 

that was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Laughing pure passion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i luved it

by gogreensoul21 on 2/27/2011 3:21:53 PM

 
 

i love to read and this is one of the best short stories i have read. Great Job! this should be turned into a novel.

by smoreshelby on 2/27/2011 3:21:04 PM

 
 

i agree, this cud be made into a great novel! but its a terrific short story! love it!

by DanceFreak99 on 2/25/2011 10:01:57 PM

 
 

This is amzing. c:

by LiveandLoveandLaugh on 2/25/2011 9:56:07 PM

 
 

This is so great. I love it<33

by michipie205 on 2/25/2011 12:43:03 PM

 
 

I love it! The stuff in the beginning about feeling like he never loved you is really emotional and raw. <3

by readerhi1234 on 2/24/2011 11:53:38 PM

 
 

That is one of the best stories I have ever read. GREATTTTTT JOBBBBBBB!!!!! 10 THUMBS UP!!! BTW I am the biggest critic I know and I approve....
Smile
Gigglemonster

by gigglemonster on 2/24/2011 10:43:00 PM

 
 

This is soooo sweet! Smile) i loooove it!

by blurb on 2/24/2011 10:24:15 PM

 
 

you should continue this and make it a loner novel. maybe about how she falls in love with the first boy and about how she knows deep down she belongs with the other guy. but otherwise, i loved it Smile

by pottergirl135 on 2/24/2011 9:34:36 PM

 
 

i love this! i just read it 4 times!!! please write a book about this and publish it(:

by loveforever21 on 2/24/2011 8:30:11 PM

 
 

OMG SOO GOOD

by Gigilikejacob on 2/24/2011 7:38:18 PM

 
 

wow this is really good!! i didn't expect it to turn out like that and i was sad that it ended!!!

by maddy18 on 2/24/2011 7:29:44 PM

 
 

This is so cute! I love it(:

by musicluva246 on 2/24/2011 7:28:51 PM

 
 

this is beautiful and so true

by *peace&love* on 2/24/2011 7:14:04 PM

 
 

aw!

by edamame on 2/24/2011 7:06:47 PM

 
 

Good job!!

by svds on 2/24/2011 7:00:42 PM

 
 

I think this short story should be a novella or even a novel someday. Like miki_amu_1fan and skatetime said, this seems like a piece straight from a book. I love to read and write, so when I finished reading this, I wanted more. I truly believe that this could one day be a bestseller. Keep writing and doing whatever it is that you're doing Smile
alaways and forever,
Jayden <3

by bbluel0ver on 2/24/2011 6:37:29 PM

 
 

OMG! This. Is. Awesome. Whoever did this, is REALLY good. And I agree with miki_amu_1fan. I feel like this a summary of a longer story. To whoever wrote this, if you see this, I just wanted to tell you that you should make a book with this. I would SO read it.

by izzyrox7198 on 2/24/2011 6:36:33 PM

 
 

I agree with miki_amu_1fan. It's really good, but I think you should go into detail about the first relationship. You should definetly keep writing.

by skatetime on 2/24/2011 6:00:22 PM

 
 

There are many reasons that people chose this time period to make changes to American life. I'm sure that many people had tried to claim their rights before, but due to lack of technology, it was to hard to spread the word and gather supporters. Now that new communication technology had been invented, people were able to spread the message of their cause and rally supporters. Another reason that many people chose this time was because they followed the examples of others. They saw that people were making the changes they wanted to see occur, and it gave them hope for their cause. Others probably got tired of having to deal with not having their rights that were guaranteed by the Constitution. Those are the most likely reasons that people chose this time period to make changes to American life.

by pondhouse on 2/24/2011 5:55:20 PM

 
 

'sokay... good detail, but I feel like the real story is missing, you know? like this is just an expert of a longer story.

by miki_amu_1fan on 2/24/2011 5:48:26 PM

 
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