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Wow that was amazing you should really take a creative writing class!
by cuppycakes1056 on 8/18/2011 11:31:21 AM
Intriguing. This could make a good opening for a novel.
by peaches and raspberries on 5/24/2011 7:40:29 PM
Aww! I started crying! BEAUTIFUL!!! I LOVE IT!!!!
by stylediva on 5/23/2011 9:55:49 PM
It was good, but I wish you had given her a name. It would've sounded smoother if you didn't keep saying "she" and "her" all the time. But I did like the story.
by fudgemonkey on 5/22/2011 8:41:35 PM
hahaha i checked it a lil late but still im BEAMING right now! im so happy, this made my day(:
by DanceFreak99 on 5/16/2011 7:28:05 PM
OMG IT GOT POSTED UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK U GIRLIES SO MUCH for the compliments! i write a few stories for fun, not for a serious career, but i really put my heart into this little one. THANK U GL for putting it up!
by DanceFreak99 on 5/16/2011 7:27:22 PM
This was really good!!!
by autumnskye on 5/9/2011 6:22:12 PM
This made my heart beat fast or maybe slower. I gasped in awe though. You got me hooked with the first sentence, and never unhooked. Keep writing.
by i_luv_devin on 5/9/2011 3:11:38 AM
Nice story<3
by FloridaGirl:) on 5/8/2011 8:16:33 PM
Hey Ladies! Do you need advice? I would love to give you some! I will answer any questions, or just talk to you when you are sad. I can give you advice about friends, guys, family, food, sports, school,growing up, or even yourself! I would be absolutely happy to help! I will give you an honest answer ASAP, and hun, nothing is too personal so don't be afraid!Thank you(:
by gracieb123 on 5/8/2011 4:58:53 PM
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