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The Brave One

 
Her mother told her everyday before she said goodbye,
That she was, beautiful, kind and brave,
And to always remember why.
 
Her mother told her to never forget what she had survived,
That time when all was lost and dark,
A time of hurt and lies.
 
Her mother stroked her hair softly, and took her held her hands and smiled,
"You've done so much, sometimes I forget,
You're only just a child."
 
Her mother claimed she had a special soul, and said to always believe,
But the girl just turned away and cried,
"Then why did daddy leave?"

-Elizabeth G.
 
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BY JIAE K. ON 10/31/2009 7:00:00 AM 34 COMMENTS

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34 READER COMMENTS

I loved it!

sk8xoxo94 on 3/17/2010 10:17:30 PM

that is an amazing poem and it has so much personal influence, and it hits close to home.

lilmusic95 on 1/21/2010 7:07:52 PM

that is so sad, but AMAZING writing!

LJSOCCER12 on 1/8/2010 6:15:25 PM

This is the best poem I've read on here so far. Keep writing.

screenname on 12/21/2009 7:40:01 PM

that's really sad ;; :') but i like it.

chomp2010 on 12/5/2009 6:41:53 PM

My reasons 2 hate
Twilight is stupid
Boys r so lame
Now that the world is obsessed
It wont be the same
Bella is useless
Girls should be smart
I really hate Twilight
With all of my heart

Glamno5 on 11/21/2009 4:55:54 PM

My reasons 2 hate
Twilight is stupid
Boys r so lame
Now that the world is obsessed
It wont be the same
Bella is useless
Girls should be smart
I really hate Twilight
With all of my heart

Glamno5 on 11/21/2009 4:55:32 PM

CAN SOME ONE EXPAIN IT TO ME??

luvcats676 on 11/8/2009 3:28:39 PM

i love the way the poem is a personal story. also the poem was beautifulSmile(: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dottylol12 on 11/4/2009 10:59:16 PM

wow thats really good! and sad

animalgirl13 on 11/4/2009 4:47:29 PM

awww really good but sad

tennischamp18 on 11/4/2009 4:18:52 PM

Till Death Do Us Part

Sometimes I worry
But mostly I think
About the one I'll grow old with
The one I'll never leave
Will he be handsome?
Will he be smart?
But most importantly
Will he have a big heart?

I'm still workin on it!

JellyBeanz101 on 11/3/2009 8:34:05 PM

that was good and sad
Smile

ray ray on 11/1/2009 6:05:55 PM

that is amazing

sweetreddancer on 11/1/2009 1:22:13 PM

Wow... I don't understand.
Who left? Why's the mother leaving her?
That's a weird poem.

cutieebabe on 11/1/2009 9:34:04 AM

Aww the story behind it is so sad Frown
but great writting skills!

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SportyGal on 11/1/2009 9:12:56 AM

That was beautiful. You definitely have a talent for writing. Keep it up! Smile

xoxo Mariah

yellow_mariah on 10/31/2009 11:12:21 PM

aaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeee!!!! this is sooo sad! but it makes me happy....its so sweet Smile.........i hope thats not weird...:p

beastiez on 10/31/2009 9:35:03 PM

i sort of get it, but don't. why'd BOTH her parents leave?? im confused!
:]

singergurly;) on 10/31/2009 8:34:20 PM

IT ALMOST MADE ME CRY! Frown I REALLY ♥ IT THOU! Smile
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jessicaop on 10/31/2009 5:27:21 PM

that is so sad im so sorry

wonderchic87 on 10/31/2009 4:15:35 PM

this is different

*barbie*girl* on 10/31/2009 3:55:00 PM

So sad!Frown

samigurl on 10/31/2009 3:25:18 PM

im confusedSmile dont get it!

IzZy <3 on 10/31/2009 1:56:06 PM

Wow that was amazing! I seriously love this and it made me cry, not kidding! Keep writing!

igymnast10 on 10/31/2009 1:02:37 PM

that was beuatiful
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tang454 on 10/31/2009 12:54:29 PM

o wow thats soooooooo deep! u have talent girlie! it really sad, and happy at the same time

froggy6243 on 10/31/2009 11:54:56 AM

That was so beautiful and sad.You have a real talent dear!

CLUB GLAMOUROUS! on 10/31/2009 11:39:00 AM

Nice. I am a little confused though.

lasagna on 10/31/2009 11:36:54 AM

I love it, but so both her parents left? Thats what i got from it, but good work Smile

camel490 on 10/31/2009 11:30:52 AM

wow that was really amazing Smile)))))))))))

iggylou on 10/31/2009 10:57:04 AM

that was so pretty i usually dont read these but this was beautiful

vana903 on 10/31/2009 10:45:50 AM

*Sniffle* beautiful Smile.

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eckogirl567 on 10/31/2009 9:14:03 AM

thats so sad

chocolatelover13 on 10/31/2009 9:06:41 AM


    

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