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I'm finally done with all of your lies.
Your perfect smile can't win me over this time.
Being with you is what caused this big mess.
All the tears and the fights, but mostly the stress.

I'm finally ready to find someone new.
Someone who is the exact opposite of you.
He'll love and protect me from all guys your type.
He and I together; we'll be the new hype.

I've finally made the step to move on with my life.
With no thanks to you, I put down the knife.
All you were to me was my very worst nightmare.
But now I've risen, a brand new me, 'cause you were never there.

By: Kayla H.

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BY JIAE K. ON 11/14/2009 7:00:00 AM 22 COMMENTS

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lovely poem, never been in that situation but reall sweet....<3

LittleMissLuv on 1/7/2010 9:18:15 AM

i can def relate to that i know exactly how they feel

barbie2151 on 12/24/2009 1:50:09 PM

wow. totally describes what im feeling right now. beautifully written, good message.

drummergirl13 on 12/12/2009 8:01:06 PM

MODMODMOD!!!!!! Do you have to send poems? or could I send in a song too? i love writing songs and i want to get them out there. Thanks Hun!

Hey girl!

Yes, you can send whatever you want! I can't wait for us to get them!

XO

Sammy

Sammy d.

Flirt403 on 12/11/2009 4:56:51 PM

Good One!XD

LaquishaJay on 12/6/2009 11:27:51 AM

This is an awesome poem! If the girl who wrote the reads it, I loved it!! It's absolutely fantastic!

lovestreehugging on 12/2/2009 6:40:55 PM

loooove it!!

cookie_monster9 on 11/30/2009 7:35:01 PM

i love this poem! i read it a while back and i could really relate with the person who wrote this, i had just had my first heartbreak by my crush. it helped a lot

hopeful on 11/29/2009 6:25:57 PM

<3 it. great poem.
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chomp2010 on 11/29/2009 1:13:58 PM

that was a great peom.
loved it!!!

great job!!!!

autumnskye on 11/20/2009 7:38:38 PM

MOD MOD MOD!!!
If I send in a photo,how do I know if you used it?Will I have to search the whole site?

Hey girl! I think that your photo would have to be approved, I am not sure if it would be used.

Eryn G.

Chelle Belle on 11/20/2009 2:56:50 PM

I liked it, but not as a poem, more like an awesome song for teens and tweens.

naturallywonderful on 11/20/2009 6:58:05 AM

MOD MOD MOD!!! I can send in photos right?If so how are they used,and do they go under you wrote it or somewhere else?Thanks ya'll are awesome at your jobs and have helped so many girls out!

Hey girl, photos are used for all diff stuff so I can't say what yours would be used for. But thanks for the support!

xoxo Olivia

Olivia A.

Chelle Belle on 11/19/2009 2:24:48 PM

Hey I did a poem and it wasnt posted!!! WAAAAHHH!!!!! all the work for nothin!!!!

freestuff on 11/18/2009 7:36:34 PM

That's really good!

S123 on 11/18/2009 5:01:39 PM

MODMODMOD Okay i submitted a couple poems to the "You Wrote It" section...how long will it be until they post a new poem? Cause i want to know if they will choose mine...=)

Hey girl! Thanks for the submission! GL posts a new "You Wrote It" about every week or so! Keep your eyes open for yours!

-Taeler

Taeler L.

minime9395 on 11/17/2009 6:36:52 PM

MOD***MOD***MOD
HEEEY! I need some help. I like someone I've known since about 2nd grade. For 4th 5th and 6th grade he went to a different school than me. Now that we are in Middle school we go to the same school again. I am almost 99% positive that he has no interest in me, at least like that anyway. I mean we talk and communicate but more like friends than anything else. Also how do I get my ex out of my head. I was on and off with him for about a year and a 1/2 and it gets really annoying lately when I start thinking I kinda' like him again. If I could I would avoid him as much as i can but he rides my bus, is in one of my classes, a lot of his friends are in my locker bay at school so he comes there a lot and he has the same lunch time as me. Just help me think of ways to stop feeling this about him. Oh, and should i tell the first guy i like him (not my ex) or just wait and see if he shows any signs that he likes me? sorry this is so long! would love your help!

lots of love,
Chesapeake

Hey girl! If you think that you still have feelings for your ex,
then you should maybe give that another try but with caution. If you
want to forget about him, then you should try hanging out with other
guys so that you can get to know them better and just see what could
happen.

Eryn G.

dancing4ever1997 on 11/17/2009 4:06:21 PM

Love it!

eilsel516 on 11/17/2009 8:08:36 AM

first time online GL writer here. loved it! keep it up, and post more stuff like that. you speak the truth.

mjdance279 on 11/16/2009 7:36:23 PM

Thats a really good poem!

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bubblegum4 on 11/15/2009 1:58:01 PM

I love it!

readerhi1234 on 11/14/2009 2:56:25 PM

Nice. Way good and relatable and stuff.
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