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The Girl Trapped in the Mirror - An original poem

 

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Hey girls! Here’s an original poem written by a GL reader just like you. Leave your critiques in the comments please.

 

The Girl Trapped In the Mirror

The girl that’s trapped inside the mirror
Screams for my attention
Anywhere I look, everywhere I look
I only see the imperfection

She’s fat and she’s ugly
She’s self-conscious and unsure
Whenever people look at me
I feel as if they just see her

She’ll never be good enough
For any boy I know
I’d try and run away from her
But there’s nowhere I can go

Every once in a while I’ll feel pretty
And the girl smiles from her mirror
But as soon as it came, the smile is gone
And the screams of imperfection are all I can hear

Still, I’ll put my best foot forward
Ignore the girl that I see
I’ll try to overlook the girl in the mirror

And try to focus on me
 
Want to showcase your work? Whether you like to dabble in creative writing, swoosh some strokes on a canvas or snap pics, send us your poems, short stories and artwork to youwroteit@girlslife.com OR just click “Submit Your Own” below.
 
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MOD MOD MOD!!!!! This poem (besides last stanza) describes me. No guy ever notices me and i feel invisible. I am in band and some people judge me because of steryotypes. How do i get the guy I like to notice me. He is one of the most popular guys in school. I was at a party and he seemed so different than the other popular guys at school. I just want him to notice me without judging me. What do I do???

 

Hey girl. Its hard to put yourself out there with out a little judgement. You just have to take a deep breath and know that what other people think isn't the most important thing in the world.  Here is some advice to get him to notice you: http://www.girlslife.com/post/2011/01/26/100-cute-things-to-say-and-do-around-guys.aspx

mary h.

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by smileyriley1011 on 6/22/2011 9:37:58 AM

 
 

everything but the last stanza describes me

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by Bootsie753 on 3/7/2011 7:31:03 PM

 
 

That is a great poem.

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by coolgirl345 on 3/5/2011 11:29:38 PM

 
 

Beautiful I LOVE this!!! It is so true!!! Marly Z.

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by sports12 on 3/2/2011 8:26:38 PM

 
 

this is such a great way to put how most american teenagers think of themselves!

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by gymnastg on 3/1/2011 8:05:12 PM

 
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