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Emotions - An original poem

 

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Hey sweethearts! Here’s an original poem about heartbreak, written by a GL reader just like you. Please leave your critiques in the comments.

 

“Emotions”

 

Emotions
Messing with my head
Confusion
Wishing I hadn't gotten out of bed.

I swear, I'm fine.
I don't need you to help me out.
The stars will align
Everything will work out.

Right now
It might seem that it's falling apart
Right now
It feels like you're breaking my heart

You're a storm to my clear day,
parts of me just slipping away.

You're fighting for your right to do nothing
And you say you'll leave, but you're bluffing.

You like me but not enough to stay,
You love me but not enough to go away

Emotions
Muddled in my brain
Anger

You're coming back again.
 
 

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BY GL READER ON 9/25/2011 12:00:00 AM

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Love this. Smile
Whenever my friends ask for help I'm just going to give them the link. <3

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by 123dotties on 10/11/2011 8:00:49 PM

 
 

luv ur poemSmile

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by kinkie on 10/1/2011 9:05:51 AM

 
 

beautiful poem!!!!!! luv it!!Smile

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by kinkie on 10/1/2011 9:05:00 AM

 
 

OMG this is an AWESOME poem!!!

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by bubblegum girl on 9/28/2011 5:37:22 PM

 
 


OMG!!! that was totally awesome!Smile keep writing!

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by ashmank345 on 9/27/2011 6:26:35 PM

 
 


OMG!!! that was totally awesome!Smile keep writing!

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by ashmank345 on 9/27/2011 6:26:06 PM

 
 



Hey girls!

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by facebooker1240 on 9/27/2011 5:40:05 PM

 
 

I JUST had a breakup 2 days ago and the way I interpret this describes exactly how my situation is

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by bandgeek97 on 9/25/2011 5:33:20 PM

 
 

Amazing, girl! You rule!

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by irishdancer202 on 9/25/2011 4:08:48 PM

 
 

Cool. That is awesome.

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by flyaway99 on 9/25/2011 4:01:00 PM

 
 

WHOA. FREAKY. This poem exactly describes my day today... weird :\

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by aneesha289 on 9/25/2011 12:28:37 AM

 
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