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Carried off - An original poem

 

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Hey chicas! Here’s a sweet original poem written by a GL reader just like you. What do you think? Tell us in the comments!

 

Carried off

 

A flash of white and I'm carried off,


To the free land of the wild in the crisp autumn air.


One brush of a hand and I'm swept away,


To a warm summer time in some future day.


One wisp of heated breath and I am baited,

Into your soul and through your heart.


It takes just one look to see the ocean blue,

I'm in the sky with one glimpse of you.

You need only what you are to be a robber

For you've stolen my love and taken it.
 
 

Want to showcase your work? Whether you like to dabble in creative writing, swoosh some strokes on a canvas or snap pics, send us your poems, short stories and artwork to youwroteit@girlslife.com OR just click “Submit Your Own” below.

 

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BY GL READER ON 11/13/2011 12:00:00 AM

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I am in love with this it's amazing. I also think you should always write 1. you can express yourself 2. Your good Smile

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by kheart on 11/19/2011 9:04:28 PM

 
 

Amazing and so true!

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by Savethefrogs on 11/14/2011 11:48:57 PM

 
 

Awesome!!Smile

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by jo525 on 11/14/2011 10:55:32 PM

 
 

I love it! awesome

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by love24 on 11/14/2011 7:06:35 PM

 
 

Really pretty! Follow me on Twitter @quotingnat225

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by uniquenat on 11/13/2011 10:49:16 PM

 
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