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Metal Benches -- An original poem


 

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Hey sweeties! Here’s an original poem written by 14-year-old Summer R., a GL reader just like you. Take a peek, then let us know what you think in the comments.


Metal Benches


The metal benches,

Seem cold and unfriendly,

You can never seem to be comfortable,

But I think about the past,

When I sat on those benches,

Cheering and shouting.


My mind wanders back to a simpler time,

When they played,

I remember being cold,

But now, I long for it.

I remember not getting it,

Hardly ever paying attention.


I remember celebrating victories,

And being quiet over losses.

I remember waiting,

Waiting for the chance,

To tell them they were great,

To tell him he was great.


I remember traveling,

great distances to see,

My inspiration,

Right in front of my face.

I remember the lights,

How I would love to see them now.


The metal benches bring a comfort,

Only I would understand,

But of all of those memories,

I remind my self,

All those boys are gone,

Off to see the world.


I wish I could go back,

And watch it all again.

For you see,

I loved him,

Now you're wondering who,

The quarter back of 2009,

My inspiration,

My brother.

 
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Nice! Laughing

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by kayla9 on 1/25/2012 6:00:23 PM

 
 

Hey everyone,please join The Walking Dead Fan Club,WWE Divas Only,The Gym Class heroes Fan Club,Adele's #1 Fans and my new club The Official HCR Fan Club!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE join those clubs or at least one of them lol thank you

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by Princess Keziyah on 1/25/2012 5:47:59 PM

 
 

i dont like the my brother part but the rest was pretty good

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by Bbeleibs on 1/25/2012 5:27:45 PM

 
 

I think that this poem would have worked better without the last verse. The "reveal" is too obvious, and ruins the sweetly nostalgic mood it had established previously.

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by peaches and raspberries on 1/25/2012 3:56:13 PM

 
 

We should have a comment page just for poems...I love writing poems

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by kellbell94301 on 1/25/2012 1:34:06 PM

 
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