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The Truthful Fog - An original poem

 

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The Truthful Fog
 
We are wrapped in a fog so thick,

it seems we are alone.

We build castles and moats brick by brick,

To hide from enemies made of stone.

They are our troubles, fears, witches and ghouls

Surrounding your protection waiting for your false shields to collapse

In your fortress you sit near light-filled pools,

To keep the shadows of the fog away…perhaps.

We invent beliefs to ignore the truth,

We build castles and forts to hide from its ugly face.

We wish for evidence to make it false, we want proof,

To have it vanish without a trace.

 

But some people walk among the fog so thick

They don’t hide from the truth

For they are heroic.

 

They don’t build castles or moats

The enemies of stone guard their fictions forever

As the people of the fog travel for hours in their small, little boats

Searching for the truth others have severed.

 

Unbelieved and different they smile at one another,

Traveling through the truthful fog like sister and brother.

 
 

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BY GL ON 4/22/2012 12:00:00 AM

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Holy crap. How old are you? That was on e of the best poems I have ever read, and get this... it's totally true!

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by Les on 1/16/2013 7:33:08 PM

 
 

Hey you guys! I am going around on diffrent writing posts because I just made a writing club! It is about the love of writing fiction and poems. You can discuss story ideas, share your stories and poems, and discuss anything you want! So come on and share your thoughts today!!
-E
P.S.: If you wanna be vice president or something, just let me know...

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by emily6119 on 8/28/2012 4:22:56 PM

 
 

*sigh* i was i was this talented Smile

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by emonade on 8/1/2012 12:08:45 PM

 
 

very good metaphoric poem!

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by meyday on 8/1/2012 11:14:19 AM

 
 

Wow, whoever wrote this poem is really talented!

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by Mockingjay2000 on 7/20/2012 10:19:26 PM

 
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