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I would just like to say - An original poem

 

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Hey cuties! Here's a poem written by a GL reader. We love for it's quirky honesty--we're totally thinking the same thing! Tell us what ya think in the comments, and don't forget to send us YOUR creative writing.

"I would just like to say, I find you very attractive"

Excuse me, sir, I don't believe we have met,
And we really haven't spoken yet.
But that's okay and fine with me,
Though I have something to say, you see.

I've noticed your lovely eyes
That sparkle blue and green and wise.
I see your curly russet hair,
And I'd recognize your melodic voice anywhere.

I bet you like to play many sports
And listen to music of all sorts.
I must admit, I love your freckles
Each and every unique speckle.

But now I watch you walk away,
And I'm left feeling a sense of dismay.
Even though your still cute from behind,
I can't help but lose my spice of mind.

Because how am I supposed to say
That you look very nice today,
If you won't turn around and see
Shy, small, and still-waiting me?
 

Want to showcase your work? Whether you like to dabble in creative writing, swoosh some strokes on a canvas or snap pics, send us your poems, short stories and artwork to youwroteit@girlslife.com OR just click “Submit Your Own” below.
 
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This poem is amazing-and so easy to relate to! If only I could write like that!

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by JackieH on 1/28/2013 4:54:23 PM

 
 

hey Smile need advice or a friend to talk to Smile i will help. come check out my advice queen pg and be a fan n if u need advice i will help just tell me ur problem and i will get back to as soon as i can and if u just wanna talk come see my proffile and write to me.. cant wait to hear from u Smile <3

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by katymarielove on 1/5/2013 11:20:35 AM

 
 

That's so cute and it's so sad how much I relate to this :-( lol

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by maggie183 on 12/13/2012 6:29:12 PM

 
 



MOD,
I am (hopefully) gonna start christmas gift shopping soon, and I have ideas for everyone in my family except a few. They are... My 17 yearold older brother, and my 19 year old tomboy stepsister. Any ideas? PLEASE?

 

Hey girl, well honestly, you can never go wrong with clothes! Check out LoveTagLA, they have some amazing new designs. Also, H and M has some really great gift ideas as well. If they are into sports, maybe try that out and give them some sports gifts. Just browse over the internet and in stores, there are tons of great stuff out now for the holidays! 


lauren r.

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by silverroseart on 12/1/2012 8:45:48 AM

 
 

Awesome! I especially love the last line.

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by typewriterfreak on 11/30/2012 5:29:58 PM

 
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