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I would just like to say - An original poem

 

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Hey cuties! Here's a poem written by a GL reader. We love for it's quirky honesty--we're totally thinking the same thing! Tell us what ya think in the comments, and don't forget to send us YOUR creative writing.

"I would just like to say, I find you very attractive"

Excuse me, sir, I don't believe we have met,
And we really haven't spoken yet.
But that's okay and fine with me,
Though I have something to say, you see.

I've noticed your lovely eyes
That sparkle blue and green and wise.
I see your curly russet hair,
And I'd recognize your melodic voice anywhere.

I bet you like to play many sports
And listen to music of all sorts.
I must admit, I love your freckles
Each and every unique speckle.

But now I watch you walk away,
And I'm left feeling a sense of dismay.
Even though your still cute from behind,
I can't help but lose my spice of mind.

Because how am I supposed to say
That you look very nice today,
If you won't turn around and see
Shy, small, and still-waiting me?
 

Want to showcase your work? Whether you like to dabble in creative writing, swoosh some strokes on a canvas or snap pics, send us your poems, short stories and artwork to youwroteit@girlslife.com OR just click “Submit Your Own” below.
 
Plus! Love to sing, dance, act or play an instrument? Shoot over a video of your star-worthy performances! It could be featured right here! 

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Awesome! I love reading and writingSmile

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by myfatsquirrel on 10/12/2012 10:46:16 PM

 
 

this poem is so honest and sweet, i love it!

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by sammyy99 on 10/12/2012 10:44:37 PM

 
 

Woah. This person's really good and skilled.

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by Gabriella123 on 10/12/2012 9:53:24 PM

 
 

Very nice poem, I like it.

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by fashionqn on 10/12/2012 9:52:29 PM

 
 

That's really good

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by April0405 on 10/12/2012 8:36:24 PM

 
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