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I would just like to say - An original poem

 

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Hey cuties! Here's a poem written by a GL reader. We love for it's quirky honesty--we're totally thinking the same thing! Tell us what ya think in the comments, and don't forget to send us YOUR creative writing.

"I would just like to say, I find you very attractive"

Excuse me, sir, I don't believe we have met,
And we really haven't spoken yet.
But that's okay and fine with me,
Though I have something to say, you see.

I've noticed your lovely eyes
That sparkle blue and green and wise.
I see your curly russet hair,
And I'd recognize your melodic voice anywhere.

I bet you like to play many sports
And listen to music of all sorts.
I must admit, I love your freckles
Each and every unique speckle.

But now I watch you walk away,
And I'm left feeling a sense of dismay.
Even though your still cute from behind,
I can't help but lose my spice of mind.

Because how am I supposed to say
That you look very nice today,
If you won't turn around and see
Shy, small, and still-waiting me?
 

Want to showcase your work? Whether you like to dabble in creative writing, swoosh some strokes on a canvas or snap pics, send us your poems, short stories and artwork to youwroteit@girlslife.com OR just click “Submit Your Own” below.
 
Plus! Love to sing, dance, act or play an instrument? Shoot over a video of your star-worthy performances! It could be featured right here! 

BY GL READER ON 10/12/2012 5:05:00 PM

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This poem is amazing-and so easy to relate to! If only I could write like that!

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by JackieH on 1/28/2013 4:54:23 PM

 
 

hey Smile need advice or a friend to talk to Smile i will help. come check out my advice queen pg and be a fan n if u need advice i will help just tell me ur problem and i will get back to as soon as i can and if u just wanna talk come see my proffile and write to me.. cant wait to hear from u Smile <3

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by katymarielove on 1/5/2013 11:20:35 AM

 
 

That's so cute and it's so sad how much I relate to this :-( lol

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by maggie183 on 12/13/2012 6:29:12 PM

 
 



MOD,
I am (hopefully) gonna start christmas gift shopping soon, and I have ideas for everyone in my family except a few. They are... My 17 yearold older brother, and my 19 year old tomboy stepsister. Any ideas? PLEASE?

 

Hey girl, well honestly, you can never go wrong with clothes! Check out LoveTagLA, they have some amazing new designs. Also, H and M has some really great gift ideas as well. If they are into sports, maybe try that out and give them some sports gifts. Just browse over the internet and in stores, there are tons of great stuff out now for the holidays! 


lauren r.

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by silverroseart on 12/1/2012 8:45:48 AM

 
 

Awesome! I especially love the last line.

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by typewriterfreak on 11/30/2012 5:29:58 PM

 
 

wow this is amazing! it's kind of funny how much that relates to all of those not-so-popular girls waiting to get noticed by that one gorgeous popular guy...great job!!

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by luvinlife12 on 11/12/2012 3:32:22 PM

 
 

Cute!

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by Nellie Jo on 11/10/2012 1:37:18 AM

 
 

cool i loved it (-

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by Kcake on 11/9/2012 5:21:52 PM

 
 

Luv it!!!

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by i <3 1d on 11/5/2012 11:37:01 AM

 
 

I love this!

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by silverroseart on 10/28/2012 10:32:40 AM

 
 

Deep... Really deep! Smile

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by silverspur on 10/20/2012 9:52:53 PM

 
 

Wow. So true!

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by maddimeade on 10/17/2012 6:10:07 PM

 
 

I really like this, it's so cute!

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by otter77 on 10/13/2012 5:46:03 PM

 
 



MOD MOD MOD MOD
I like to do my Christmas shopping early. I have gifts for everyone except my dad.
Do you have any ideas? He is a website designer and a photographer. Thanks!

 

hey! if you share your dad's interest in photography why don't you take some pictures inspired by him or his work and get them framed or make an album or something? I bet he'd love that Smile 


Helen S.

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by HappySunshine on 10/13/2012 3:27:23 PM

 
 

That is soo cute! I love it!

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by alexia_directioner<3 on 10/13/2012 10:13:26 AM

 
 

Awesome! I love reading and writingSmile

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by myfatsquirrel on 10/12/2012 10:46:16 PM

 
 

this poem is so honest and sweet, i love it!

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by sammyy99 on 10/12/2012 10:44:37 PM

 
 

Woah. This person's really good and skilled.

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by Gabriella123 on 10/12/2012 9:53:24 PM

 
 

Very nice poem, I like it.

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by fashionqn on 10/12/2012 9:52:29 PM

 
 

That's really good

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by April0405 on 10/12/2012 8:36:24 PM

 
 

I luv this poem, it's adorable!!!

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by Kikikim8 on 10/12/2012 8:20:58 PM

 
 

Am i the only person who thought of Harry Styles???????

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by favcolorgreen on 10/12/2012 8:00:54 PM

 
 

Woah! That's amazing!!! Way to go whoever wrote this! I feel the same way! Frown but you seriously have a gift for writing!!

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by soccer.bear1 on 10/12/2012 7:52:25 PM

 
 

This is really cute!!
Also MOD MOD can you answer a question...
I kinda like this new boy in my school so i try to say hi to him most of the times i see him in our hs hallways... Is that weird, will he think im like stalking him, or is it a good way to get noticed? Also, thanks for all the help you mods give, we love you all!!!

Hey girl,

Is he saying hi back? If he likes the attention, that's definitely a way to get him to notice you, but you could also tone down to maybe once a day. Or try having a conversation instead of just saying hi! Try to get to know him better as a friend, and then he'll be saying hi to you too Smile

Meghan D.

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by LilyLookALike on 10/12/2012 6:37:42 PM

 
 

Wow. I could never be able to write something like that. Whoever wrote this is very skilled and talented Smile

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by YouCanCallMeCat on 10/12/2012 5:49:00 PM

 
 

thts deep! DEEPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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by Susmita24 on 10/12/2012 5:42:59 PM

 
 

Awwwwwww, that's so cute!

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by ColosalMascara on 10/12/2012 5:40:59 PM

 
 

Spelling fail on the home page. It's "like" not "liek".

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by Gingerk8 on 10/12/2012 5:33:37 PM

 
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